AP

The first draft of my AP doesn't have the solution part

I added the solution part at my second draft.

For my last draft, I added social media solution and the alternative argument

Revision Strategies: Work

Revision Strategies

In the part of my article revision, I mainly revised the content of literary reviews. Before, I was not familiar with the content of LR. After the teacher and classmates took the initiative to raise my questions, I adjusted the article.
First, I deleted the content that did not match my article. For example, I deleted content not related to my topic. Secondly, referring to the direct analysis of my own understanding of the elephant’s social intelligence, I carefully read the literature and analyzed how the article introduced the elephant’s intelligence.

Revision Strategies: Text

LR

The first draft of my LR was not passing, professor said it's not a LR at all

I rewrote all my LR for my second draft, the introduction part is totally different.

For my last draft, I introduced the literature using the correct format and I integrated the sources in a logical way.

Revision Strategies: Work